it looks nice. but i dun like that it is B&W, and i dont like bottom right corner.
IMO it needs a very small white border.Only IMO..
7/10
Mmm.. I think you've over lensflared it, it looks too complicated IMO, I think you need to also try other effects like smudging around focal or just add some good C4D's in and try some filters and see what happens.
Need to improve on text as well.
Good Work.