Text is nice.
Add flow.
The green brushes..they dont suit, dont blend with the stock,cuz the stock is darker.
Originally Posted by Brizingir
Text is nice.
Add flow.
The green brushes..they dont suit, dont blend with the stock,cuz the stock is darker.
This seems like a good comment to start from.
I see you tried creating a flow with the brushes, but the flow with the gun and stuff is pointing upwards so you might want to follow that as a genearl rule.
The green brushes don't fit true, try incorporating more effects, C4D's are really helpful.
Thanks i am still newbie :S
Totally Agreed with Ali. Couldn't have put it better, myself.
i dont know what is flow xD
The bg is good, but don't rely on brushes too much.
They're useful, but not a crutch.
6/10.
First one. Don't like the blur on the second one.
i like the creative text and all but it seems you just added light over an image, not much look going on
Why do I see lots of sigs with the House style text?
You know the square around the first letter. Anyways, what was said before. Personally to me it just looks like a stock and brushes, but it's nice .