Great work but you need to remember these are thread the designs. You're trying to sell a product if you get the jist
Some of them aren't really thread designy and are much more concept art and freebase work. Or there is too much going on.
Don't be afraid to keep it simple
For example you have a fornite render larger then any product or service on the page. UK what I mean?
And not trying to be rude.
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