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Good for a starter, still needs some work tho.
#3 ·
Quote Originally Posted by Janitor View Post
Good for a starter, still needs some work tho.
where can i improve? or what does it lack in your eyes? thank you for the feedback
#4 ·
Get rid of the thunder, other than that looks good!
#6 ·
Nice one for starting.
#7 ·
not bad, i like it!
#8 ·
Not my style, but not bad for starter design good shit.
#9 ·
I'm going to be brutally honest here: in the first mock up, I couldn't read the name nor did I see the mask shape. And is the red text by design?

It doesn't have a fashion brand feel to it, especially being unreadable.

Look at exsisting designs and see what makes them appealing. Don't give up
#10 ·
That's good for a start bro

But need to improve : )

Kudos
#11 ·
Nice one for starting.
#12 ·
Not quite my style but a good start. Logo sees a bit small on the hoodie.
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