Looks like 2 different stocks were used?
The people in the background..I dunno..
Seems like it's throwing the theme off.
Here we got bad ass Hancock as the focal,
then these 2 lovebirds in an alley, being all gay.
Then we have that red brushing or whatever it in front of the focal,
That doesn't need to be there.
Overall you're getting better.
The quality opposed to your prior work is a step up compared to your others.
Try to work on composition, color balance,effects, and adjustment layers
