rate my avatar

this was a pretty quick and easy one, i just thought i mite test out my new idea for a avatar, some carbon doors that close and change text, i think it came out alright, i dont like the overall colouring and the doors are cartoony, but my idea went well frmo idea to art, so i think i should improve it soon..... i also made one with a scrolling bar of light, althugh the animation is a little messy----- here are both avatars===

[IMG]http://i60.photobucke*****m/albums/h27/mpc-standoff-mpc/mpgh-ava-sliding-doors.gif[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i60.photobucke*****m/albums/h27/mpc-standoff-mpc/mpgh-ava-sliding-bar.gif[/IMG]

please rate both /10 ...

Nice effect you have there, it just needs something else... Sound! Yes that is it; it seems to need some sound for when the door things open and close! Also I don't think that the text fits very well with it, not sure what else you could try though, keep it up!