well i hate to be chronologix, but the render hjust stands otu and has no blending whatsoever, and the text is too static and brightly put in, stands out too much and looks too solid. the background is barely a background, just used one brush called Nightsky didnt you? i have it too, layer man, layer! and also the render just doesnt fit the background, different blues and they are too seperate from each other. i hated that, but it nmust be sed. work needed, but good attempt as you are starting up. 5/10