GForce new Intro - Test

Im the creator of the Knife tele Kill Video for GForce
but i wanna made another Intro.
If somebody have idea's or idk. plss give feedback..
i made just a test intro, i wanna know if you guys like this, there isnt audio on, i will create it soon..

i will remove the laggs

WATCH IN HD

really nice intro

Not bad

Make the text blend more with the background don't give it an outline because it clashes with the bg

Add some intro music like star wars one

indiana jones theme song
TUTTUUUUTUTUTUTUTUTUUTUUTUTUTTUUTUTUTUTUUUUTUUUTTU UTUTTUUTUTTUUTTUUUUTUTUTU

Don't just use stocks like that. learning from a tutorial for AE would be better. the text doesn't blend with the effects, and it's too long. keep intros short. from 3-10 seconds.