Latest- Popout

Alright, I am consulting with Slatz while i creating this sig this is what i have gotten in 5 mins, i will be making more versions but tell me what you think, anything i could do to it and if you like it or not p.s if you dont have any idea's just rate out of /10

V1 [IMG]http://i307.photobucke*****m/albums/nn310/LachStaunton/popoutsmaller.png[/IMG]

V2[IMG]http://i307.photobucke*****m/albums/nn310/LachStaunton/PopOutcopy.png[/IMG]

Finish until someone answers and thats if i want to edit lol xD: [IMG]http://i307.photobucke*****m/albums/nn310/LachStaunton/NellyDonecopy.png[/IMG]

Does everybody know about Winter Breeze brushes?..

Don't know why??? and if your going reply can you give me a mark outa /10 or answer too my questions lols cause i ran out of idea's + im watching Rugby World Cup, Aussies v New Zeland WOOP! AUSSIE AUSSIE AUSSIE OI OI OI so far so good we winnin!!!!!

Well, it's not that bad.
The render is a bit choppy.
Plus, the C4D should be blended a bit more.
6/10

how would i fix the render?? not sure how i would b able to do it

As ImNoobzz said, the render is choppy; simply use a smooth brush eraser around the edges of it if you aren't sure. The sig itself is fucking huge and I'm not really a fan of fucking huge . The C4D(s) look as if they need to be placed hardup against something because they are cut off at the top and you don't seem to have much in the way of background either. Maybe you should have just had the render popping out and the C4D used in the background. The text is nice and simple, which is good, though may have looked better to the right seeing as there is loads of space there. I'm just being picky now, I'll stop. Other than that it looks kinda cool and unique.

Make it smaller...

It looks like it is cut at the top.