Abstract smudging.Followed this tutorial : Abstract Smudging | Photoshop Signature Tutorials - Sigtutorials.com Edit: Didn't use a proper border in the previous image >.> C&C please .
Smudging need to be a little more complete and less blurry adding more details inside the smudged area with more smudge would help this
I think the colours are a bit too vibrant and as you have been told, they also clash. Still you're getting a lot better bro and I think you're going to become a great GFXist with a lot of practice. Good luck bro. 7.5/10