Very good job kira, the lighting is very well as it seems to highlight the render a lot, which isn't neccesarly a good thing, although it compliments the render in a neat way, it makes it stand out in places where it isn't needed, the blending near the bottom is almost perfect, the top and left side of the render could use a bit more, try to add some more blending effects and possibly a little smudging on the render a bit, near the bottom to distract the eye from that area of focus and focus on the focal point, the face, i like the sort of see-through hair, but it does distract from the face, try sharpening the face a bit more, but not to much because the focal point is usually a bit more sharpen than the rest of the piece, overall pretty good, better than your others... 8/10