Colour Lines [LP]

are you a fake version of the corndog fag?

no lol who the hell is corndog?

Lulz I bet he is.

Its who you are trying to be

i aint lol i havent even heard of them

Nice lines/Nice render:
Put some more lines around the render and use more colours-this my opinion
but its good 8.5/10 ;-)

oh hey hot dog come on more!!!! and lol nice work!!

Lol needs more wrok, looks all retroy

looks like something itunes wold have lol gj

looks pretty good. although the right side needs more, its too biased towards the left. and your erasing needs some work. if you did erase that is.

Get some images or effects going in the background.

But nice job. 7/10.

/Gewd...