Bottle Design

For our Vis Com Class we have to create a bottle that defines us.. Since i am a gamer i came up with an energy drink
tell me what you think (:

I was really stumped on what to put in the negative space till i got this idea of the after effects

This is sorta like our final for the semester so i worked pretty hard on it.

Please leave some feedback.

very amazing
god jobs

I love it, haha. Xp for the gamers. Freaking awesome

It sounds like a pretty good idea for a drink,you could add some plus symbols above the logo as well.

I'd love some x-tra power

Ehh, it just seems a bit lazy.
What's that white thing supposed to be? I assume it's some sort of way to show what's inside the bottle. Why make it such a weird shape? Why not just have the letters "XP" on it overlapping each other vertically? It just seems like you put that there to sorta "waste space".
I also don't like how the ingredients are listed. You couldn't have made them "fit"? You just left them as vertical and called it a day. they also made me cringe pretty hard but that isn't really design related
I can't even tell what's going on in the god damn "before" picture. It looks like a boulder is using a fishing rod.

All in all, it really isn't that interesting. I mean sure, the text logo on the front of the bottle is actually pretty good, but the bottle looks like exactly what it is: a homework assignment.

Originally Posted by bowlcut

I can't even tell what's going on in the god damn "before" picture. It looks like a boulder is using a fishing rod

I believe it's a contortionist collapsing face-first due to lack of energy, either that or a ball rolling down a grassy knoll.

The name is ultra cheesy but that can be brushed aside, this is a really good job on the design though.

The white on the front is going to be cut out so you can see the stuff inside, Its my name cut out.

Originally Posted by Mr.Seyeko

The white on the front is going to be cut out so you can see the stuff inside, Its my name cut out.

Well I'll be damned, it is.
Still woulda been better with just XP though.

I think the before and after pictures could use some work. Other than that, really good.

Nice work. Not a big fan of the font, great work.

This design looks incredibly douchey.. so it's perfect for an energy drink, I guess.

Not for me.

The typography for the logo is really good. The cutout, it doesn't match the overall design at all, but the idea is good. The back however, look pretty bad. Take some design cues of existing bottles and try and arrange you ingredients and description to suit.

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