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Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


Is this compliment or ??
#Confuzzled
'tis a good thing.
Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post
Hey guys, I finally have come to face it, this time I place it
I haven't treated yall with the natural respect you yourn
So here's some lyrics i made while stoned or zoned
I just don know man I hope you get it and or understand
Pleave forgive me, our relationship, based on online actions you see
So here it is, lies and cries





Yo,
I think we should start over
My actions our thoughts
Bring me to this place where we once fought
N' I don't wan this shit for us you know
A rappers crisis burn down and die for'us
Kithi just want to be heard
I just don wanna b shunned
Listen up everyone
I will from now on, no longer b a dick and half
Forget this shit, including past
Think bout' it as a fucking relapse da I surpassed
I ain't no conquest it's simply my fate
So what the fuck does it take
Imma cut do da chase
My trace, do you member it
Well god damn imma abandond'd it
It wasn't da best, but from dis day on imma improve my cast
Cast as my fucking shadowing pasts
No need to mention'n dem, I set fire and threw em in da trash
What matters is Now, this day, my hope my fate
Hibbdy- doppbity - my shit was not great
But im busy now, figure'in out my trial longs with shit punched in my face
I can't hear it, busy spit'in things I never even thoughtd about!
So im heading in this that way, this fuck'in new route!
Im done with my ways, visit'n these houses of ill repute
If you understand that I hope you do
With all diz honor, strife n' pride
I finally realize that Im open'in my eyes
So my last words to you all are from my heart
I know these lyrics aren't the best, but shit it's art straight out of my chest
My god my god I lay down and cry for you please just follow me guys
Myself I fucking surprem'i'sized
I ain't got now lies, no boundaries, no lengths
So simple I say it, lay it down to rest
From this day on, imma treat you guys with respect
Cause I ain't been the best, I just need'em some rest
I am sorry, just been so stressed
I hope guys figure out the rest








, @Kithio @Ahl, @ProHackBot998, @nilly, @C453, @ossmc82, @Travoos, @Trapped, @Joshyswag, @jakedogg100, @donran

Not only is this for them ^ but for anyone I have been mean/ rude too.
I hope you will forgive me and yes this includes @Raple and @Lovroman too

SorenOwl/SorenOwlProd/Sucidial




And yes all the typos are there for a reason -_-
Just for you grammar nazi


Would you guys mind telling me how I did?
I did spent a good 2 hours on this so please tell me what you think.
Your gonna want to stick me in there somewhere, or else I'll have to cut u loose like a strand of hair..
Quote Originally Posted by Kithio View Post
Well don't do rap then... I never liked rap, It's a stupid form of *music* if you can even call it that... It's just poetry with a retarded twist in it... Please write something shorter and an actual message for me please xD

P.S... did I say... I CAN'T' STAND RAP... Thank you
Its the art of rhythmic literacy, which personally, I find quite impressive.
Quote Originally Posted by Depp View Post
Its the art of rhythmic literacy, which personally, I find quite impressive.
Thx ^_^
Also @Kithio I find it rude that you would use the word retarded. That's kinda crossing the line when using an adjective, I know your vocabulary is better than that.
For example you could use asinine, or deranged, or "null"
lel null as in coding G_G
Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post
Many "font" haters here
Comic sans isn't comic sans for no reason. I disapprove your misuse of comic sans in rap lyrics
Quote Originally Posted by CrazyJani View Post
Comic sans isn't comic sans for no reason. I disapprove your misuse of comic sans in rap lyrics
I disprove your life style.
"We cannot, of course, disprove God, just as we can't disprove Thor, fairies, leprechauns and the Flying Spaghetti Monster." -Richard Dawkins
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