MPGH Magic

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Rate 1-10
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hmm looks pretty good
9/10

Sorry man.
4/10

its not bad.. def better than some others ive seen, the text is a bit too big; but you need to work more, on expressing the theme of your piece. If you are calling it magic, make sure it has those aspects.. i give it a 6.9/10 bc its not terrible.. and it has some flow