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  1. 11-23-2009 #1
    Brizingir
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    First sprite.

    So yh...This is my first sprite , like the title says...





    V2



    I think this came out bettah


    If you dun see the 4px border then imageshack fucked it up again..
    Last edited by Brizingir; 11-23-2009 at 02:35 PM.
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  2. 11-23-2009 #2
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    sorry 7/10 i dont like background maybe a fractal or a C4D around the render would be nice...
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    ITS NOT IMAGESHACK!!!!!!!!!!!!
    It's your eyes. I can see it, it's a white border against a very light grey bg...
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    Good for your first, text is positioned wrong imo, needs more colors and work on blending.
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  4. 11-23-2009 #4
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    Added V2 .
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  5. 11-23-2009 #5
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    Eh it's alright for your first one, I guess you could say.
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    I like the effect around the sprite.
    +Latest
    [IMG]https://i810.photobucke*****m/albums/zz21/zweet_kiler/Lava.png[/IMG]

    [IMG]https://i810.photobucke*****m/albums/zz21/zweet_kiler/venom-3.png[/IMG]
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  7. 11-24-2009 #7
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    Quote Originally Posted by mexicano007 View Post
    I like the effect around the sprite.
    OKaay.


    Any C&C?
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    Second is much better, but I'm not too kean on the background for some reason..Just looks a bit too plain. Lightning effects are good, text probaly needs to be positioned closer or just remove it.

    Very good for your first though. :]
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    Quote Originally Posted by V I R U S View Post
    Second is much better, but I'm not too kean on the background for some reason..Just looks a bit too plain. Lightning effects are good, text probaly needs to be positioned closer or just remove it.

    Very good for your first though. :]

    The BG is plain yh...
    Im glad you liked the effects
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    hello mpgh,
    I am back for 1 hour
    can't make signature but on weekend probably i back
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    give it 8/10 nice sig but work on it more

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    I like V2 better, V1 was 2 bright 4 me...

    Uhh i personally dont like the background

    i would suggest using the pen-tool and make a energy path and find a nice fractal/C4D and create a clipping mask
    [IMG]https://i1052.photobucke*****m/albums/s455/Moshtixxx/chibi_sakura_miku_by_dav_19-d4stik3.png[/IMG]
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    Quote Originally Posted by Gesus View Post
    I like V2 better, V1 was 2 bright 4 me...

    Uhh i personally dont like the background

    i would suggest using the pen-tool and make a energy path and find a nice fractal/C4D and create a clipping mask
    Nice Idea .
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    c, I am a Smrt C00kie
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