sorry 7/10 i dont like background maybe a fractal or a C4D around the render would be nice...
Eh it's alright for your first one, I guess you could say.
I like the effect around the sprite.
Second is much better, but I'm not too kean on the background for some reason..Just looks a bit too plain. Lightning effects are good, text probaly needs to be positioned closer or just remove it.
Very good for your first though. :]
I like V2 better, V1 was 2 bright 4 me...
Uhh i personally dont like the background
i would suggest using the pen-tool and make a energy path and find a nice fractal/C4D and create a clipping mask