It's really nice!! Good one!
Needs a bit of work, but for a first background it's pretty good. I'd suggest downloading a brush pack, some layer style psd's (not often suggested but comes in handy) and playing with filters, and stuff like pen tool
text could use some edition, but other then that it looks good
9/10
Text need to be worked on to fit the background more but the background isn't bad, its simple and works as a background
Pretty nice, but I dislike the Assassins creed font/look.
I would've made it White, Birth of Hero, and then let it overlay or dissolve or any other layer option that works, maybe add some outside blur/drop shadow.
[img]http://i1114.photobucke*****m/albums/k538/ImminentJM/assin.png[/img]
something like that but with your text, i know text can be hard because it has to complement everything else and even now i have a hard time with it thats why i don't use a whole lot of text