Hate.

Hate.

Got inspired from something that happend to me lately in real life its really simple and nothing special but i wanted to share it anyway.CnC is always welcomed.

I don't understand the clouds mate o.o

Also you should work on making your typographies a little more complex

Otherwise looks straight man

Originally Posted by Organzd Chaos Ban

I don't understand the clouds mate o.o

Also you should work on making your typographies a little more complex

Otherwise looks straight man

Dunno i just felt like i wanted to use them not really a reason behind them maybe i could work a bit more on the text but i wasn't in the mood really :O

It's cool but I think the background needs some edits.
Good job tho.

i dont really get the blood. but quote text is A1.

Blood looks bad and out of place. the desaturated sky was an okay idea, the extra cloud wasn't. The black lines look cool. If I were you I'd make more around the typography to make it look trapped and create an anxious, scared theme.

I think the basis was good, then you ran out of ideas and made the out of place things like the cloud and blood.

Other than that, it's okay typography.

Originally Posted by ZippyZap

I will be honest i wasn't trying to hard i just liked the text and wanted to make it through photoshop i the blood its really weird and not going well with the text at all done i just felt like it and put it.I could work more on the text for sure because i wasn't feeling right at that time i just didn't care much but the idea about making the text and giving that feeling of scared or something like that its really clever imo and thanks for mention it i may make a version 2 soon and take under consideration these points.

It doesn't make much sense to me. If you wanted to kill people, why wouldn't you just kill them?
Why would drinking the poison (hate) even be considered harmful to another if self ingested?

Imho, its good without the blood and those weird lines on the sides.

It looks good, but I think you should've emphasized the word "Poison" a little bit more.
Perhaps try highlighting some of the words with different colors too?

i like it.Keep work!

Originally Posted by NCRox99

It looks good, but I think you should've emphasized the word "Poison" a little bit more.
Perhaps try highlighting some of the words with different colors too?

I feel the same way there was some words "keys" there i could do more work on them.

Originally Posted by Ethereal

It doesn't make much sense to me. If you wanted to kill people, why wouldn't you just kill them?
Why would drinking the poison (hate) even be considered harmful to another if self ingested?

he's probably saying by killing yourself
you'd harm others
via you being gone

Originally Posted by Ethereal

It doesn't make much sense to me. If you wanted to kill people, why wouldn't you just kill them?
Why would drinking the poison (hate) even be considered harmful to another if self ingested?

You are the one that is drinking the "hate" because its an emotion that you can only feel.I hope that makes sense :O.

Nice job!

))))))

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