Suggestion

dont touch the wind or text tool

I really don't see what you did there.

f-f-f-f-fail

other then the text being too big and distracting and the render too winded... this is okay..

Yea the wind was a gamble won't make the mistake next time, and you guys are right the text IS too big.. But it just felt empty with small font..Better or worse if I brightened it, like a stronger red in the background?

It's not too bad. To be honest, mpgh will always have people who give very negative comments, just ignore that, if you think it's good, then you're doing something right.

As for the signature, the text blends in with the white in the background, i love cursive text, but it's just too distracting. And as for the render the left eye (his right eye) looks alittle weird. Not sure, but all and all its not bad 6.5/10 keep it up!

Hm.
Better than what Irish made, I'll give him that.

1. That wind looks like shit.
2. His eye with light on it? Too much difference in lightinng, cause the way I see it, the white in the background would say that there's the light source behind, which means.... You guessed it. There should be no light on his face.
3. Text = No. Just no. Too distracting.
4. Pixely? OMGWTFBBQ!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?

I could go on, but I'm not gonna spend the day saying what could have been done and what was done bad. But like was said, read tuts and basically, do NOT touch the wind tool/ motion blur/ ANY blur until you get better with the other stuff you tried. And dun touch txt tool yet. (<------- Wow. Bitch much, eh? Rofl)