quick sig

just made this quicky.

the outcome is ok i not the best

but it was a quicky



comment the crappy sig(sum1 will say its crappy)lol

i like it its Cool super :>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>

nice use of c4d, its not refined, rather that 'edgy' feel, almost looks etched in. looks good, a bit confusing to see whats going on but i like it all the same. lower the outline px on the font , and use a less distractive font. maybe you could try giving it a outline then fading the fill so that its a thin fill that u can see thru with a good outline, try it. much easier and better then normal 3px font. but other then that, colours flow and its done well. improving by the minute elemnet, keep it up!!!! i give it a respectable 6.75/10 nice one!

render is quite different and interesting :F| ( MY NEW SMILEY, HE HAS HIS MOUTH WIDE OPEN)

well its crappy :P, its hard to tell what i should focus on really, the text is white and too big, i suppose its not that crappy though

The text is really lacking.... if nothing else, duplicate the background layer, set it as an overlay and plave it over the text layer....

i understand the meaning of Blend the render with the background but what u have done is like..... where is the render???i see it but it mixes soooo much with the background its hard to say what it is

the text needs more work as well

no its not gay ( sorry if im reiviing old thread i missed this one) it just looks abstract in a different way... confusing sig tho!