First Sig!!

Umm constructive criticism, i combined about 3 different tutorials to make this although i feel i could have done better somewhere... mehh...

EDIT:



is the text any better? sorta just looked at bull3t's text tut and did what he did -.-'' nothing special lol

Text fails.

Try some tuts you'll improve.
6/10.

Better then other 1sts ive seen, work on text as stated

I was talking about the font, it doesn't quiet suit the render.

and the color should match the scheme more, ya get me?

i think its too dark :@

change the color of the text..

add some effects onto it..

overall, i give a 5.5/10

now text is too dark..

change it to red